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Stephanie H asked:


I need to know if this sentence is written correctly and if it isn’t why?

6 Comment(s)

  1. On May 26, 2009, Psycho T said:

    Time the National Anthem would last.

  2. On May 27, 2009, Don said:

    You should’ve put a semi-colon instead of a colon. Also, it’s an incomplete sentence.

  3. On May 31, 2009, Tim O said:

    Period after Indianapolis Capitalize W in worse (new sentence.)

  4. On Jun 3, 2009, Lemony said:

    no. “th” isn’t a word and your punctuation is off….wtf

  5. On Jun 3, 2009, moron police said:

    semi-colon instead of colon. or else a period, then capitalize Worse…

  6. On Jun 6, 2009, DaDirtySouth said:

    You should remove the colon, but its a run-on and incomplete sentence as well.

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